真题透析2009年公共英语考试写作备考(1)

　　主讲：石嵩

　　作文：1.功能性作文

　　Temporary Hotel Receptionist

　　Pleasant mediate-sized hotel at the heart of cambridge seeks a young person with pleasant personality to assist the reception office.

　　Previous experience an advantage but not essential.

　　Acknowledge of at least one foreign language.

　　The name of the hotel

　　write an application letter to the hotel manager to apply the position. The letter must include the following two points:

　　The reason that you apply

　　Ask for the interview

　　At the end of the letter don't write your own name and use "Li Li"to instead .

　　2.write an essay

　　There are two pictures. write an essay about these two pictures.

　　Describe these two pictures

　　what do you learn from these two pictures

　　Picture

　　1.一个人在路上骑自行车，他把伞钩在了他前面的卡车上，用卡车拉着他骑车。

　　2.这个人从医院刚刚包扎好出来。

　　解析：

　　一、第一部分要求考生写一份求职申请(Letter of Application for Employment)，当看到此题时，

　　1.考生要注意审题

　　1)首先仔细阅读该广告;

　　2)弄清楚招聘单位对应聘者的要求;

　　3)假设自己就是应聘者，对照自身情况，看是否符合要求。尤其注意从技能(Skills)、专长(Speciality)、所受过的职业训练(Training)、工作经验(Experience)和教育背景(Educational Background)等几方面作自我评估，寻找两相吻合的地方。

　　2. 写求职信时应注意的事项

　　1)写明你的详细地址及电话号码，以便对方与你联系;

　　2)称呼得当。

　　如果广告上没有写联系人是谁，则在求职信的开头可用：Dear Sir或Dear sirs。保险一点，可写 Dear sir/Dear madam。 如果广告上已写明联系人，在写求职信时，你就应写其姓名：Dear mr. Smith,或Dear ms. Shirley green等。

　　3)求职信应简短，引人注意。

　　3. 求职申请信的格式

　　1)开场白(opener)

　　最好开门见山，直接写明你写此信的目的，避免不必要的客套。

　　⑴ I'm writing to apply for the position of ......advertised in today's Shanghai Daily.

　　⑵ In replying to your advertisement in today's Shanghai Daily, I am applying for the position of......

　　⑶ In /Through today's newspaper I noticed your advertisement for ... /I have learned that you are hiring...

　　⑷ I would like to apply for /to be considered as a candidate for the job/ post/ position advertised in... / I saw advertised in / I have just seen in the ...

　　2) 正文(Body)

　　写求职信就像推销产品，言辞必须具有说服力，能打动对方。因此在正文中，你必须着重强调你的优点、长处，如学历、工作经历等，来证明你就是对方希望招聘的人员。但切忌过分夸张。

　　⑴ my working experience includes two months part-time receptionist with a cNR co. and one year part-time assistant office manager for Haper's Stationery.

　　⑵ I feel I am well qualified to ... for the following reasons...

　　⑶ I have experience of ..., therefore I may have the ability you are looking for.

　　3) 结尾(close)

　　最后，你可写一些希望参加面试并请求对方尽快给你答复等客套话。

　　⑴If my application is successful, I should /would like to...

　　⑵I am available for a personal interview if you are interested in my application.

　　⑶I would appreciate an interview at your convenience.

　　⑷If these meet your requirements, please grant me an interview. I look forward to your early reply.

　　⑸may I discuss my qualifications more fully with you at some time you find convenient? Please call (021)632-8976 at any time .

　　像这样的功能性作文都比较格式化，所以考生在备考的时候一定要多积累一些功能句，头脑中要对此类作文有大致的框架。 www.gaofen123.com

　　二、第二部分是一个大作文，与08年的作文是同一类型看图作文。

　　绝大多数考生对此类型的作文并不陌生，平时也都做了很多训练。但在考试中还是会看到很多学员面对考题无从下手。看图作文写作的关键是要弄清楚题意，即清楚所给图画想要传达的真正信息是什么，理解图画的表层含义及深层含义，然后将其清楚、正确地表达出来。

　　看图作文的一般写作模式是：

　　开始段：描述图画表层含义及深层含义并由此得出结论。

　　中间段：解释原因、分析结果，或进一步论证主题思想。

　　结束段：提出建议或发表个人评论。

　　下面给出一我们在这样的作文中会使用到的一些句型，仅供大家参考:

　　描述图画：

　　1)As is described in the picture... The picture shows...

　　2)The picture describes... It indicates that...

　　3)In the picture, we can see ... It reveals that...

　　解释原因：

　　1)There may be several possible reasons for which will be demonstrated below.

　　2)The explanation for this phenomenon involves manyplicated factors.

　　3)Abination/ number of factors may contribute to/ account for...

　　另一个原因：

　　1)Among all the important/convincing reasons above, one should be emphasized...

　　2)of course, this does not in itself explain/ account for...

　　3)one of the mostmon/ popular reasons for ... is that...

　　表明态度：

　　1) As the issue plays such an important part in both society and our life, due/ more attention should be paid to it.

　　2) As the issue has a far reaching influence on both society and our life, due/ more attention should be paid to it.

　　举例：

　　To take ... as an example, one example is..., Another example is..., for example

　　承上启下的连接词：

　　1) to begin with, then, furthermore, finally

　　2) to start with, next, in addition, finally

　　3) most important of all, moreover, finally

　　4) on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点)

　　5) for one thing, for another thing

　　结尾：

　　用于过渡的短语：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus, Therefore, we can find that...

　　obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

　　Accordingly, I rmend that some measures be taken.

　　consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

　　在考试的过程中，有很多考生不会合理的安排时间，他们习惯在试卷上打草稿然后再誊写在答题卡上，这样很浪费时间。建议考生应练习打腹稿。而且在考试过程中，不要"求难，求异"，要"求准"。有些考生英语基础不是很扎实，也总想在作文中写出一些高难的句子，结果弄巧成拙，要想写出质量高的句子并非一日之功，而是需要我们考生在平时多下功夫。

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